So it was just a normal day after school, I walked across the street to get to my mum’s car. It was bright and sunny when I looked outside of the window, but then I realised, It was my MUM’S BIRTHDAY. We forgot to give her a birthday gift! So I panicked, I kept on thinking of what I should do? But then I remembered how much money I had. I had a lot, especially for my age. So I thought I could shout her dinner! I asked her where she wanted to go, and she said “Korean Barbeque?” I said “Ok.”
So our family went and we waited. The place finally opened. We already saw a variety of options to pick from. So I grabbed my food and sat at our table, Everyoneelse sat down with the barbeque boiling. I tasted some of the food my dad made and it was delicious. But then I saw the famous and Fabulous Bulgogi! I had a bowl filled with rice and I ate both, I shouted in my head “THE FLAVOUR IS STUPIDLY GOOD!” Sadly we had to leave. But it was an amazing encounter with the delicious, scrumptious exquisite Bulgogi.
KIa ora John I really like how you wrote about something you have done after school. I like your nice and funny words you have add to your story. Keep up doing your work and playing football.
From Adnan